James the Giant wrote:I think it needs to be re-written. It's too wordy, and a regular joe reading it would be confused by it. It needs to be a wiki, quick and understandable.
Yeah some editing would do it good. The last two sections shouldnt even be there.
"Even if you've read the whole Canon and can remember lots of teachings; even if you can explain them in poignant ways, with lots of people to respect you; even if you build a lot of monastery buildings, or can explain inconstancy, stress, and not-self in the most detailed fashion ... The only thing that serves your own true purpose is release from suffering.
"And you'll be able to gain release from suffering only when you know the one mind."
While you're fixing the text, how about dropping a couple of the 'external links'? The Light of Asia is, surely, superseded as a reference. And the 'Feeling Buddha' is far enough from any mainstream interpretation to be seriously misleading to anyone who really needs the basics about the 4NT.